I was coming home from the university and being in New York City you have to walk just about everywhere so I decided to make up a poem as I make my way back. I need brutal honesty for this since I have no sense of poem composition or anything like that. P.S. Let's go Simms, hopefully he won't be as amateurish as my poem!
I sit alone in the dark
While watching the dogs of Hades bark
The first one calls to me
Soon your soul will be naught
The second yells
Is it not god who made your soul so swart
The third one whispers
Your heart is black as if Hades himself brought it about
And so I sit alone in the dark
This will be me if we loose to the Chargers on Sunday. SO PLEASE McD DON'T MAKE ME SIT IN THE DARK!!!!


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