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The Empire crumbled to dust. Bloodletting. Suffering. Sorrow. Thus began a decade of nomadic wandering.

No leader emerged, traitorous souls grew bold. The Master of Minds worked tirelessly to rebuild, to no avail. A new rival arose, a great figure who rode upon a colt - destroyer of orangemen.

The rider of colts squelched the hopes of the Master of Minds everywhere he went. Desire waned, complacency spawned.

Languishing as a pawn to other greater nations, a Lynch mob formed - led by a bearded plumber and a great Champion of the people. Together they would rebuild.

Seven long years past Imperial glory, the armies of orange won many key victories, spearheaded by the big Ahl warrior, over all rivals. Even the magnificent Bray-dee, and his compatriots, could not overcome the orange onslaught.  Empire feared.

Total victory at hand, the armies were utterly destroyed by a goliath of a man they called Bus. Trampled under his massive stride, a great many slaughtered.  Retreat became one's desire.

The great bearded plumber returned the following year and led his army to many great early victories, but there was an usurper within the ranks. The Master of Minds conspired against the great Empire to install this usurper to the head of the army.

The heroic warrior, Ahl, slain.

The bearded one fell from grace to the mutiny, destroying any chance for Imperial glory. Thus began the spiralling decent of the Empire into debauchery and destitution.  A vagabond through sin and self indulgence.

A once great dynasty fell into disrepair, giving way to a new rival empire. A foe Charged into the homeland to bring pestilence and death.  The bolted armor of the enemy flowed like rivers through the ranks of the once great orange army.  Defeat was certain, the usurper shrugs. 

The bastard usurper imbued upon himself all the rights and privileges of a King - claiming divinity through every victory, shifting blame to goats after every defeat. The army lamented, falling into its own selfish arrogance.

For two and a half years, decadence and complacency ruled the hearts of the orangemen. The Great King became weary...impatient; The Master of Minds blinded by his own arrogant genius would foolishly insult his Lord.

The Great King, with aged wisdom, gathered up his allies to depose the all-too-powerful Master of Minds. A great purging was nigh.

To be continued...

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Only one chapter left to write...hopefully I'll get it done before my daughter is born(or it may never get done!) lol

I figured 7 chapters was the perfect number for a short story such as this one. ;-)

Verbose in style, dispersion of thought, procrastination in life.

The guy formerly known as ZAPPA

by Tim Lynch on Dec 2, 2009 5:09 PM MST reply actions  

Who has publishing rights?

Can I get this bound in leather as gift?

by Flunkie on Dec 2, 2009 5:36 PM MST up reply actions  

Always schemeing (and never spelling)

Get an illustrator, do a book along the lines of Grimms Fairy Tales – bet you could sell 15 or 20 thousand in the Metro area alone.

by Flunkie on Dec 2, 2009 5:56 PM MST reply actions  

lol, if only I were so entrepeneurial.

If this was to be more than just a fun thing to do I’d surely spend much more time with plots and story lines.

Keep this secret, but – if I remember I said this or thought this – I plan to add a chapter to this story after the end of each season. ;-) Perhaps then I will expand a bit…

Verbose in style, dispersion of thought, procrastination in life.

The guy formerly known as ZAPPA

by Tim Lynch on Dec 2, 2009 7:57 PM MST up reply actions  

NO

The quick hits are the charm – any more and you would over do it. The illustrations would make the theme come alive and give hours of chuckles as it was passed arround – def must have at the next party.

by Flunkie on Dec 2, 2009 8:43 PM MST up reply actions  

Hey Tim

Think you could release a Character list at the end? lol most of em were pretty straight forward and i think i got all of em, but jsut to be suurrree..

AWESOME STORY!

by march20 on Dec 2, 2009 6:12 PM MST reply actions  

I try to list them all in the "tags" section.

In case I am too vague.

Verbose in style, dispersion of thought, procrastination in life.

The guy formerly known as ZAPPA

by Tim Lynch on Dec 2, 2009 7:54 PM MST up reply actions  

great series

I’ve been enjoying these…

I too dabbled in pacifism once...

by waltersobchakbronco on Dec 2, 2009 7:39 PM MST reply actions  

Thanks!

I’ve selfishly enjoyed writing them. :)

Verbose in style, dispersion of thought, procrastination in life.

The guy formerly known as ZAPPA

by Tim Lynch on Dec 2, 2009 7:54 PM MST up reply actions  

Loving this series Tim

Character may be manifested in the great moments but it is made in the small ones -- Philip Brooks

by KaptainKirk on Dec 3, 2009 10:28 AM MST reply actions  

Thanks buddy

Verbose in style, dispersion of thought, procrastination in life.

The guy formerly known as ZAPPA

by Tim Lynch on Dec 3, 2009 11:24 AM MST up reply actions  

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